Death by glory!

OKAY, now I've said before I consider myself more so a author then an artist, and I frequently come up with ideas from time to time and draw out the idea in my sketchbook... the is one I recently came up with... its not done at all... just a starting idea, its not even colored... but tell me if, just based on the picture, if you think this would make a cool story, maybe i'll even write a intro...